Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 28 June 2019
Our writing
We are learning about persusively writing we have writing about toy avderdisment and why you should buy it heres a video of mine about beyblades it was really fun 😁.
Our aurgements were really funny our first aurgements were about flying and invisibility I chose invisibility i chose invisibility because if you were flying you could get sick, you could steal for the poor and homeless you could sneak on to first class and steal all the food and drinks. I enjoyed filming the Toy avderdisment. Whats your favourite toy?
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