Best day ever!!!

This week we have been learning about recounts.I achieved my goal and my goal was to check if my writing made sense.My next step is to use more describing words and This my recount.

The best day ever\Disneyland 

I heard people screaming for joy on the awesome roller coasters.

I heard people laughing.

I saw scary rides.

I saw mickey mouse dancing.

I felt very happy.

I felt excited to ride some awesome rides.

I wonder if I would get sick if I rode all the rides?