The Tunnel
We were exploring the mysterious forest then we found this glowing portal that was like a giant door. It started speaking to us! “jump in me I have an amazing surprise for you” so we jumped in but it separated me and my friend...
Thursday, 26 March 2020
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Hi Jayden!
ReplyDeleteI saw this piece of writing when you emailed me and thought it was excellent!
For some reason it's published in a straight line? Can you try again?
Well done :)