Monday, 20 April 2020

The Story of pentacost

First Jesus resurrected to heaven and said a gift will come to you the disciples were looking at the sky then some angels came down from heaven and said why are you looking at the sky Jesus will soon return the same way he left.Then the disciples prayed in someones house then a mighty gust of wind filled the house and then tons of flames hovered on to of there heads then open there mouths to pray to Jesus but the started to speak in different languages.a crowd of people were suspicious about the disciples so the waited out side the house the disciples were in and then the disciples started to come out while they were speaking different languages some of the crowd praised it but some didn't believe and the said they were just drunk but the peter came out and said every thing that was happening now was promised long ago by Jesus.

THE END 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jayden!
    I hope that you have had a lovely weekend :-) We are enjoying some time at home with our kitten Oscar.
    I really enjoyed reading your recount of Pentecost that you have posted this morning. You show that you have a great understanding of the events around when the Holy Spirit came to the Apostles.
    One thing that would make it a little easier to read would be for you to reread and include some more full stops.
    Have a great day Jayden!
    Take care
    Mrs Stewart

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