Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 20 April 2020
The Story of pentacost
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Hi Jayden!
ReplyDeleteI hope that you have had a lovely weekend :-) We are enjoying some time at home with our kitten Oscar.
I really enjoyed reading your recount of Pentecost that you have posted this morning. You show that you have a great understanding of the events around when the Holy Spirit came to the Apostles.
One thing that would make it a little easier to read would be for you to reread and include some more full stops.
Have a great day Jayden!
Take care
Mrs Stewart