Thursday, 7 May 2020

The Little Shoemaker

W.A.L.T. Make desciptive charichtar desriptions.
this week we have been looking at the Little Shoemaker and this my charicter description.

The Little Shoemaker
Once there was a shoemaker, a little shoemaker, though he was an adult but he was as small as a toddler.His favourite thing to do was to make shoes, not any shoes magic shoes ones that are alive,he makes these types to match the owner and make them even better. When he makes his shoes he wears a brown aprint and blue jeans.

Now you know all about the little shoemaker!

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2 comments:

  1. Mrs Rooney7 May 2020 at 13:03

    hi Jayden it's great to see you posting. I would like to go to his shop as I would love some magic shoes. Do you think he liked his job? Good job on remembering the WALT. Next time you could try copy and paste then your work should fit on the page. Great Work!!

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  2. Miss Pownall11 May 2020 at 16:45

    Great to see that you're describing what he wears and I love the simile that you used.
    Next time your post use the buttons control-shift-v this should stop the words going off the page.
    Miss P

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