W.A.L.T. Write a persuasive text.
this is my writing why all children should not have pets.
Why I think All Kids Shouldn't Have Pets
It is outrageous that people think every child should have a pet. I think this because some people are allergic and they can be very expensive and you need to spend a lot of time with them.
First of all some people are allergic to animals and we don't want people to get sick that's just mean. My cousin is allergic to cats.
Secondly they can be very expensive, some people can't afford them and you don't want be poor.These are some reasons they are expensive vet bills, food and water, equipment E.G (leash and toys).
Lastly some people don't have the time to raise a pet. Like dogs need alot of exercise and bonding time. We had to get ride of our old dog cause we were too busy.
Thats why i think all children should not have pets, thank you for listing to my arguement
Well done Jayden. You have have some very strong points in your argument for why all children shouldn't have pets. I particularly like the way that you used the word 'outrageous' in your introduction.
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