Friday, 5 June 2020

My Writing

This week for our hotspots we had to do a free write and this is mine


The Doors

One morning I walked through my bedroom door and there was another door! But it was starting to get unusually cold wait I'm in Antarctica! I saw a POLAR BEAR running at me in a distance then I opened the other door and walked in suddenly I started falling in a VOLCANO AHHHH! There was another door I reached for the door but i missed ahh h hh hhhhh but then a carpet? came swishing down to save me and it did but then it dropped me on the way home right next to a cave, it was getting kinda dark so i went inside the cave but there was three sleepy looking grizzly bears i tried to tip toe out but... One big grizzly bear eye peaked at me and looked really angry so i ran for my life literary then a door appeared in my face and I opened it you guessed it, it teleported me to another random place,this time it was the MIDDLE OF THE OCEAN and there was a giant great white shark! Swimming towards me so i slapped my cheeks to think of a idea but instead i woke up?, IT WAS ALL A DREAM.   

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