Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 5 June 2020
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Hi my name is Jashaia I really like the blog post you did about the environment. I really like how you people are going to the Beach to pick up the rubbish. Did you know that we went to the Beach to pick up the rubbish too. I would really love to know were are you people going. We went to Onehunga Beach. Next time, I think you could make your sentences longer.
ReplyDeletethank you for the advice and we would go to new Brighton beach :)
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ReplyDeletehi jayden I like the goolle slide it
ReplyDeleteHi Jayden, Kalem here from next boor.I like the warning slid because it is red and stands out. I like fishing so its good to look after the environment. Next time you could do a WALT. Do you like going fishing?
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